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The Second Draft Script |
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The Second Draft Script |
| EXT. MARATHON, FLORIDA, BEACH -
GRAHAM + CRAWFORD - DAY The highlit aqua water burns out sections of the two men imposed in front of it. The beach is white sand. JACK CRAWFORD -- mid-forties, large -- came down from Washington. His suitcoat over the driftwood log and his rolled-up white sleeves says City, not Florida Keys. WILL GRAHAM -- late thirties -- in a faded Hawaiian number and sun-bleached violet shorts, belongs. Graham smokes. Crawford drinks from a glass of iced tea. |
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begins page one of the second draft screenplay. We can clearly see
that Writer/Director Michael Mann had planned his opening down to the last detail. From paper to screen an almost perfect description of the image on the right....apart from the faded Hawaiian number at least. The following pages contain 4 extracts from the draft script to illustrate just some of the many differences between this and the final feature. For the fuller picture, download the draft screenplay in zipped WORD (.doc) format. |
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